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托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１）

Whichonedoyouprefer,tosolveproblemsonyourownexperienceandknowledge,orto

askothersforadvice?

Asknowledgeandexperiencerveastwimtowersinproblem-solving,oneisoften

prentedwithtwomajorpathsthatpavethewayforfinalfulfillment,eitthertowrackhisbrain,

justlikewhathappenedtoNeuton,siitingformanyyearsunderanappletreeandeventually

figuringoutondofthegreatestuniversalrulesthatgovernthewholeglobe,ortoekforothers’

widsomthroughtheiradvice,justasinthecaofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunder

ractical

goalisinvolved,however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespect

andaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.

Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers’advicecontributegreatlyto

experienceandknowledgerelated

toproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindand

ethoughtinsomeone’smindis,moreoftenthannot,far

lessshiningcomparedwithgroup’plainsthefamousoldsayingthatonees

furtherwhenstandingupontheshoulders’ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderis

alwayswithgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasized

tormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailto

enhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,or

eventheentireglobalvillage.

Askingothers’adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone’sownpromotesdemocracy

sofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancesto

speaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsour

sofcommunication,idea

exchangesometimesfocusmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingabout

perspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteand

erationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,

enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,and

stressmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesritobetter,ifnot

raphradfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannot

dowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2)

CaofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishingamost

racticalgoalisinvolved,however,Benjimin

Franklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoften

turnouttobetheprimealternative.

Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers'advicecontributegreatlyto

experienceandknowledgerelated

toproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindand

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ethoughtinsomeone'smindis,moreoftenthannot,farless

shiningcomparedwithgroup'plainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneesfurther

whenstandingupontheshoulders'ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalways

withgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe

tormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhance

capabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventhe

entireglobalvillage.

Askingothers'adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone'sownpromotesdemocracy

sofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancesto

speaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsour

sofcommunication,idea

exchangesometimesfocusmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingabout

perspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteand

erationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,

enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,and

stressmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesritobetter,ifnot

raphradfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannot

dowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(3)

Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,

oyouthinkisbeterr?Givereasonsforyouranswer.

Aftertheycompletetheiruniverrsitystudies,somestudentspreferrtoliveintheir

odyhashisownreasons

ygraduation,adethis

decisionbecauofthefollowingreasons.

Firstly,replentyofopportunitiesfor

work,manybiglibrariesforstudies,veraldifferrentmusiumsforvisit,andnumerouscinemas,

obackthere,Iwillhavenodifficultyinfindinga

jobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.

Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,hisinto

considere

inthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.

Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesandrelativesto

,Icouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleand

makemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,acktomy

homecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletottledowncomfortablywithout

anytroubleandwasteoftime.

Inshort,mychoiisbadonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.I

thinkitisabetterornsiblechoice;inacertainn,itisamust.

opinion,whatarethequalitiesofagood

neighbor?Uspecificdetailsandexamplesinyouranswer.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(4)

Ifyouhaveagoodneighbor,esomeonewhocaresaboutyour

needsandyourproperty,whoishelpfulinthelittleday-to-daysituationsthatcomeup,andwhois

supportiveintimesofcrisis.

Agoodneighborissomeonewho,forinstance,understandsthatyourchildrenmay

occasionallyrunacrosshislawn,-'llrealizethatchildrencan

becarelessaboutthingslikethat,andhewon'tmakeabigfussaboutitunlessitbecomesaregular

amevein,heknowsthatyou'llunderstandifsomeofthetrashfromhistrashcans

rwords,heisnsitivetotheunintentionalthingsthatcan

n'tmakeabigdealaboutthem.

mple,sheasksyourpermission

beforedoinganythingthatinterfereswithwhat'ansshewouldn'tplantahugetree

antedtoputupafence,she

thetwoofyouwouldevensplitthecost.

'dgiveyouaridetoworkif

yourcarwasbroken,andletyourchildrenstayatherhouintheeveningifyougotstuck

youwouldhelpmaketheother'slife

easier.

Whensomethingreallyawfulhappenstoyou,likeadeathinthefamily,agoodneighborwill

uldmeansomethingsmall,likemakingsome

uldmeansomethingbig,like

helpingyougetthroughthesadnessofthefuneral.

Ithinkonlysomeonewhohaxperiencedabadneighborcanreallyappreciateagoodone!

ecanmakeallthedifferenceintheworldtoyour

life.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(5)

eopleprefertoprepareandeat

oyouprefer?Uspecificreasonsandesamplestosupportyouranswer.

Somepeopleliketoeatoutatfoodstandsandrestaurants,whileothersliketopreparefoodat

ithverybusyjobsoutsidethe

houdon’l,though,it

ischeaperandhealthiertoeatathome.

Whileeatinginrestaurantsisfast,avedinnerata

restaurantwithafriend,yalotofgrocerieswith

nchatafast-foodstandusuallycostsfiveorsixdollarsforoneperson.

That’noughtofeedthewholefamilyathome.

Eatingathomeisbetterforyou,trestaurantsareoftenhighinfatandcalories,

andook

foodathome,umargarineinsteadofbutter

onyourpotatoes,,youcancontrolyour

taurant,youmayeatafullplate

offood"becauyoupaidforit."

It’’thavetoshop,orcook,l

homecookingdoesn’relotsofsimplemealsthatdon’ttake

,they’refasterthaneatingout,especiallyifyouthinkofthetimeyouspend

drivingtoarestaurant,parking,waitingforatable,,waitingforrvice,anddrivinghome.

ntastegoodandbe

rcookingathomebecauofthemoneyandhealthissues,

butpeoplewillmakethechoicethatfitstheirlifestylebest.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(6)

题目：Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatanewmovietheatermaybebuiltinyour

upportoroppothisplan?Why?Uspecificreasonsanddetailsto

supportyouranswer.

ANewMovieTheater

Entertainmentisanimportantpartofeveryone’eedtotaketimetorelax

siertorelaxwhenanappropriate

ore,Iwouldsupportaproposaltobuilda

newmovietheaterinmyneighborhood.

Entertainmentplacescanbringsomedisadvantagestoacommunitysuchasincreadtraffic

andnoi,butIbelievetheadvantagesofanewmovietheaterwouldoutweightheconcerns.

Foronething,eywantedtoeamovie

theycould

addition,itwouldbesaferforchildrentovisitanearbymovietheaterratherthanoneinsome

ally,anewtheatermightattractotherbusiness,suchasrestaurants

andcoffeeshops,wherethepeopleofmyneighborhoodcouldgotorelax.

Inshort,anewmovietheaterintheneighborhoodwouldincreathenumberof

uldenjoythemlvesmoreeasilywithout

reasonsIwouldsupportthe

buildingofamovietheaterinmyneighborhood.

译文：一家新电影院娱乐是每个人生活中一个重要的组成部分。我们全都需要时间放

松才能过健康的生活并

有效率地工作。在住家附近有合适而且方便的娱乐设施能使我们更容易放松心情。因此，

我赞成在住家附近兴建一家新电影院的提议。

娱乐场所会为社区带来一些缺点，比如增加交通流量及噪音，但是我认为新电影院的

优点多于缺点。首先，它可以节省附近居民的时间。当他们想看电影时，他们只要走路到

电影院，而不需要花时间坐公共汽车或开车去。此外，对小孩子而言，到附近的电影院比

到市区其他地方的电影院安全许多。最后，一家新的影院可能会吸引其他商家前来，比如

餐厅及咖啡厅，附近居民可以到这些地方轻松一下。

简言之，住家附近兴建新的电影院可以增加居民娱乐上的选择。居民可以更容易得到娱乐，而

不用花很多时间前往其他地方。基于这些理由，我赞成在我的住家附近兴建电影院。

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(7)

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Dancingplaysanimportantroleina

cificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

舞蹈在文化中起到重要的作用，同意与否？

Aroundtheworld,cesare

createdaspartofcelebrations,asreligiousrvices,aspreparationforchallenginghuntsand

warfareandtoexpresssorrow(lessoftenthantheothersituations).Indeed,dancedoesplayan

importantrolewithinacultureandrevealsawiderangeofinformationaboutthecharacteristicsof

fthemostrevealingaspectsofdancearethenatureoftheculture’ssymbolsand

artformsrevealedincostumesandequipment,thebodylanguage(movesandgestures)which

giveinformationaboutsocialcontactbehaviorsandfrequentlythestyleofpreferredmusicforthe

culture.

Ethnicdances,andcertainlypopulardancing,anywherearoundtheworldhaveassociated

hdancing,theparticipantsareabletoreveal

andexpresstheirchonroleinthegarmentstheychoo;socialrolesinthedanceareshown

ntlydancersutilizeobjectslike

swordsorsticksorhoopsormusicalinstrumentstofurtherrevealinformationabouttheirrolein

uchasspecialheadwearandjewelryarefurther

examplesofthegarmentsthatingeneralexpresspreferencesandculturallysignificantdetails

abouttheparticularculture.

Dancers,bytheverynatureoftheactivity,physicallyexpressbeliefsandattitudesassociated

dancestheparticipantsaremodelingtypicalactivitiesoftheir

cultureanrdances,

onecaneexpressionsofdeepemotion:love,worship,grief,strength,anger,sobtain

cluesabouttheinnerfeelingsoftheculture’rovidesanopportunityfor

otherstowitne,

danceisa(usually)publicstatementsothatobrverscanehowmembersoftheculturetreat

thowhoareoldermembersoftheoppositex,morerespectedmembers,etc.

Thethirdaspectofdancethatrevealsmuchaboutacultureisthemusicorsingingthatis

erscaneevidenceoftheofthetypesofinstruments

characteristicsoftheculture,andwhoplaystheinstrumentsaswellashowtheyareud--

instrumentsmaybeassociatedonlywithspecialeventsandthustransmitvaluablecultural

ntlysingingispartofadanceprogram,andagainanobrverhasan

thisaspectofdance

particularlyfascinatingduringabrieftimeIspentinaruralvillageinZimbabweafewyearsago.

idesacommunalopportunity

formembersoftheculturetoartisticallyexpresmotionswhileactingouttypicalactivitiesand

siderobrvers,manyvaluabledetailsaboutthecultureare

revealed．