【高三精准培优专练】读后续写(山东)附解析

优培11 读后续写（山东）

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2020山东卷】

The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people

in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People

were trying to help each other meet the challenges.

Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting

the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she

would bring food and medicine to them.

One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a

man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy.

The little boy—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.

“I wish you could e him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a

help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't e what he can do.”

After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help

him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a

great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成).”

The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a

good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John nt us?

Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to

the hous and ll it.”

注意：.

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.

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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.

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【范文】

Paragraph1: When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.

Then she said, “You may nd him every Saturday morning, if you will pop the corn for him

yourlves. John, will you agree to take charge of the work?” “Indeed, I will,” replied John, and he

kept his word. Very soon the children were busy popping the corn, while their mother went out to

buy the paper bags. When she came back, she brought Bernard with her. The corn was all popped,

the paper bags filled, and arranged in the basket when Bernard arrived.

Paragraph2: With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. And much sooner

than could be expected, he returned with an empty basket. Never had he earned so much money

before in his life. When he found that it was all to be his, he was so delighted that he could hardly

speak, but his bright smiling face spoke for him. People began to watch for the “little pop-corn

boy,” and every week he had at least fifty cents to take home, and often more. All this was becau

of John’s bright idea, and the way he carried it out.

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（一）

One never knows what one is going to find when one steps out into the world. Even something

as simple as a walk through your neighborhood can result in either mild excitement or unusual

adventure if the cards are right.

On a sunny afternoon, Mike journeyed into the construction site near his home. Suddenly, he

heard something coming from around the side of a nearby building. It sounded like the whining(

悲

嚎声

)cries of an animal. He curiously turned the corner, only to e a small dog standing on its back

legs and wagging its tail pitifully. He then noticed that the poor thing emed to be stuck at the waist

between a small concrete wall and an even smaller broken wooden fence.

The poor animal's difficult situation was pretty obvious and Mike knew that if he did nothing

and left the dog there, it might not survive. He had no idea how long the animal had been there up

until that point. It might not have eaten or drunk anything in days. Determined to help, he looked

around to find a stick, proceeded to climb up onto the cement slab and pointed his stick back at the

clog. He was trying to pry()above the animal by inrt the stick between the cement wall and

撬动

the smaller, broken wall, but the terrified animal obviously didn't know his intention and attempted

to bite at the tool and barked at him fearfully. The fright in its eyes said everything.

After at least a minute or so of trying to free the dog, Mike found his plan much more difficult

in practice than it had stayed inside his own head. The hot sun was beating down. Drops of sweat

running down his face, Mike sat clown on the ground and scratched his head with annoyance,

thinking about what in the world his next move was going to be. Beside him, the dog curled up into

a ball, whining mirably.

注意：

1.150

续写词数应为左右；

2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick.

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【范文】

Paragraph 1:

Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick. He tried

from a different angle. For a brief moment, he made eye contact with the dog in an attempt to assure

the dog that he was there to save him. Seeming to n his kindness, the dog became calmer and

less scared. However, after veral unsuccessful attempts, he sank himlf to the ground, frustrated.

Just at the moment, he glanced at some pieces of wood. An idea occurred to him. He tried wedging

the pieces into the gap, pried and pushed. At the same time, he stayed cautious not to frighten the

poor dog.

Paragraph 2:

Eventually, with the few well-positioned pieces of wood, Mike managed to inrt his stick in the

right way. A little unsteadily, the animal got to its feet and pulled itlf out fully. “Yes !” The rescuer

exclaimed in excitement, unable to deal with blood dropping off his hand—he was injured while

saving the dog. Behind him, the dog wagged its tail furiously and sniffed at his feet, happy to be free.

Mike knelt down and stroked the dog, saying “Go home, boy!” Seeing the dog disappear in the

distance, Mike continued his way, bathed in the warm sunshine.

（二）

Holidays are not necessarily for fun or rest. Doing something meaningful can also gain

special pleasure. When the final bell rang, the students were reminded that there was no school on

Monday—the Labor Day. “Enjoy your extra day off,” said the teacher to her class.

An extra day of fun suited Kayla just fine. She loved breaks. She wanted to go out to play with

her friends. When the school bus dropped Kayla off, she ran into the hou happily.

“How was school, Kayla?” asked her mom.

“It was great, Mom. I am excited about no school on Monday. ”

“You just started back to school two weeks ago. Already in need of a break, huh?” asked

Kayla’s mom with a laugh.

Kayla slept in the next morning. Saturday was her favorite day of the week. It rained most of

the day, so Kayla enjoyed playing video games inside. On Sunday, her friends came over and they

played basketball for veral hours.

Then it was Labor Day, you know, the extra day off that Kayla was so looking forward to. But

Kayla was awakened early that morning by her dad. He told Kayla that in honor of Labor Day, the

family would be cleaning both inside and outside the hou. Kayla couldn’t believe it. This was a

holiday. A day when she was suppod to be enjoying freshly squeezed lemonade while playing in

her tree hou. As Kayla wiped her eyes, she began to wonder if this was just a bad dream.

“Kayla, your breakfast is ready. We have a lot of work to do today. Let’s get a move on,” said

Kayla’s mom. As she sat down at the kitchen table, Kayla asked her parents,

“Are you rious about working today? Isn’t Labor Day a holiday?”

“Yes, Kayla. It is,” replied her dad. “But your mom and I thought working hard today would

make you appreciate why Labor Day was obrved in the first place. ”

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go to out to play with her friends! She was against the annoying plan from the bottom of her heart,

but she had no choice. First, Kayla was arranged to wash the breakfast dishes. After that, she was

asked to give their puppy a bath. She knew it was a hard task, which needed a lot of tiring, careful

and patient work. She has begun the work with great unwillingness.

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But things began to change as she was doing the chores. Brushing the puppy, she found it was

a lot of fun with so many soap bubbles. Then it was on to yard work where Kayla helped to pick up

sticks. She pretended the small sticks were basketballs, and shot them into a large trash can. So the

work was done with great pleasure. Kayla felt proud to e how much better the yard looked. When

she finished her meaningful chores, Kayla enjoyed relaxing in her tree hou. The lemonade tasted

wonderful after a hard day of work.

（三）

Kusa, a 10-year-old boy, has looked out for his big sister, 12-year-old Pahnuly, for as long as he

can remember. At school, he helps her unpack her things at her locker. At home, they read together,

play games and practice counting.

Pahnuly has autism (). People with autism often have trouble talking with others. They

自闭症

might repeat things over and over, or be interested in only one subject. But it was Pahnuly that

inspired Kusa to think differently. One day, they played ping-pong with their parents at home in

Brooklyn Park. But Pahnuly struggled with it. So Kusa wanted to find a way to make it more suited

to his sister’s needs. He came up with a new game bad on ping-pong. It is called Aeropong

becau the ball ems to float in the air. In Aeropong, a ping-pong ball hangs from a frame. The

players hit the ball back and forth. It’s kind of like tennis, but no one has to cha the ball.

At first, Pahnuly didn’t show much interest. But soon, Kusa heard a sound coming from the

front room. Clack. Clack. Clack. Pahnuly had picked up a paddle () and was tapping the

乒乓球拍

ball. Then, she started hitting it back and forth with Kusa and their dad. Eventually, the family took

a trip to Menards to buy some PVC pipes and fashioned a portable frame for the ball to hang from.

Stasica said. Kusa told his classmates the game was meant to make people smile, especially his big

sister. “When she scores,” he said, “she dances.”

Paragraph 1:

Aeropong has become an esntial family activity in Kusa’s home.

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Widely spreading on the Internet, Kusa’s game got attention across the country.

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【范文】

Paragraph 1:

Aeropong has become an esntial family activity in Kusa’s home. The family all play the

game wearing T-shirts with the game’s name on them. Pahnuly watches the online clips nearly every

day. She was celebrating a win at Aeropong over her dad. She waved her pink cat paddle in the air.

Cats are Pahnuly’s favorite animals.

Paragraph 2:

Widely spreading on the Internet, Kusa’s game got attention across the country. It soon gained

great popularity. Meanwhile, a toy company decided to produce Aeropong on an industrial scale.

Now, he dreams of becoming a "creator and businessman". He said his big sister has already

优培11 读后续写（山东）

真题在线

2020山东卷】

The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people

in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People

were trying to help each other meet the challenges.

Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting

the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she

would bring food and medicine to them.

One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a

man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy.

The little boy—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.

“I wish you could e him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a

help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't e what he can do.”

After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help

him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a

great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成).”

The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a

good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John nt us?

Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to

the hous and ll it.”

注意：.

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

【范文】

Paragraph1: When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.

Then she said, “You may nd him every Saturday morning, if you will pop the corn for him

yourlves. John, will you agree to take charge of the work?” “Indeed, I will,” replied John, and he

kept his word. Very soon the children were busy popping the corn, while their mother went out to

buy the paper bags. When she came back, she brought Bernard with her. The corn was all popped,

the paper bags filled, and arranged in the basket when Bernard arrived.

Paragraph2: With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. And much sooner

than could be expected, he returned with an empty basket. Never had he earned so much money

before in his life. When he found that it was all to be his, he was so delighted that he could hardly

speak, but his bright smiling face spoke for him. People began to watch for the “little pop-corn

boy,” and every week he had at least fifty cents to take home, and often more. All this was becau

of John’s bright idea, and the way he carried it out.

提分训练

（一）

One never knows what one is going to find when one steps out into the world. Even something

as simple as a walk through your neighborhood can result in either mild excitement or unusual

adventure if the cards are right.

On a sunny afternoon, Mike journeyed into the construction site near his home. Suddenly, he

heard something coming from around the side of a nearby building. It sounded like the whining(

悲

嚎声

)cries of an animal. He curiously turned the corner, only to e a small dog standing on its back

legs and wagging its tail pitifully. He then noticed that the poor thing emed to be stuck at the waist

between a small concrete wall and an even smaller broken wooden fence.

The poor animal's difficult situation was pretty obvious and Mike knew that if he did nothing

and left the dog there, it might not survive. He had no idea how long the animal had been there up

until that point. It might not have eaten or drunk anything in days. Determined to help, he looked

around to find a stick, proceeded to climb up onto the cement slab and pointed his stick back at the

clog. He was trying to pry()above the animal by inrt the stick between the cement wall and

撬动

the smaller, broken wall, but the terrified animal obviously didn't know his intention and attempted

to bite at the tool and barked at him fearfully. The fright in its eyes said everything.

After at least a minute or so of trying to free the dog, Mike found his plan much more difficult

in practice than it had stayed inside his own head. The hot sun was beating down. Drops of sweat

running down his face, Mike sat clown on the ground and scratched his head with annoyance,

thinking about what in the world his next move was going to be. Beside him, the dog curled up into

a ball, whining mirably.

注意：

1.150

续写词数应为左右；

2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick.

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_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

__________________________

（二）

Holidays are not necessarily for fun or rest. Doing something meaningful can also gain

special pleasure. When the final bell rang, the students were reminded that there was no school on

Monday—the Labor Day. “Enjoy your extra day off,” said the teacher to her class.

An extra day of fun suited Kayla just fine. She loved breaks. She wanted to go out to play with

her friends. When the school bus dropped Kayla off, she ran into the hou happily.

“How was school, Kayla?” asked her mom.

“It was great, Mom. I am excited about no school on Monday. ”

“You just started back to school two weeks ago. Already in need of a break, huh?” asked

Kayla’s mom with a laugh.

Kayla slept in the next morning. Saturday was her favorite day of the week. It rained most of

the day, so Kayla enjoyed playing video games inside. On Sunday, her friends came over and they

played basketball for veral hours.

Then it was Labor Day, you know, the extra day off that Kayla was so looking forward to. But

Kayla was awakened early that morning by her dad. He told Kayla that in honor of Labor Day, the

family would be cleaning both inside and outside the hou. Kayla couldn’t believe it. This was a

holiday. A day when she was suppod to be enjoying freshly squeezed lemonade while playing in

her tree hou. As Kayla wiped her eyes, she began to wonder if this was just a bad dream.

“Kayla, your breakfast is ready. We have a lot of work to do today. Let’s get a move on,” said

Kayla’s mom. As she sat down at the kitchen table, Kayla asked her parents,

“Are you rious about working today? Isn’t Labor Day a holiday?”

“Yes, Kayla. It is,” replied her dad. “But your mom and I thought working hard today would

make you appreciate why Labor Day was obrved in the first place. ”

Paragraph1

：

At first, Kayla felt disappointed at her parents’ plan for the holiday.

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：

But things began to change as she was doing the chores.

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______________________________________________________________________________

（三）

Kusa, a 10-year-old boy, has looked out for his big sister, 12-year-old Pahnuly, for as long as he

can remember. At school, he helps her unpack her things at her locker. At home, they read together,

play games and practice counting.

Pahnuly has autism (). People with autism often have trouble talking with others. They

自闭症

might repeat things over and over, or be interested in only one subject. But it was Pahnuly that

inspired Kusa to think differently. One day, they played ping-pong with their parents at home in

Brooklyn Park. But Pahnuly struggled with it. So Kusa wanted to find a way to make it more suited

to his sister’s needs. He came up with a new game bad on ping-pong. It is called Aeropong

becau the ball ems to float in the air. In Aeropong, a ping-pong ball hangs from a frame. The

players hit the ball back and forth. It’s kind of like tennis, but no one has to cha the ball.

At first, Pahnuly didn’t show much interest. But soon, Kusa heard a sound coming from the

front room. Clack. Clack. Clack. Pahnuly had picked up a paddle () and was tapping the

乒乓球拍

ball. Then, she started hitting it back and forth with Kusa and their dad. Eventually, the family took

a trip to Menards to buy some PVC pipes and fashioned a portable frame for the ball to hang from.

Stasica said. Kusa told his classmates the game was meant to make people smile, especially his big

sister. “When she scores,” he said, “she dances.”

Paragraph 1:

Aeropong has become an esntial family activity in Kusa’s home.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

【范文】

Paragraph 1:

参考答案

Then Mike went around to the other side of the wall and grabbed hold of the stick. He tried

from a different angle. For a brief moment, he made eye contact with the dog in an attempt to assure

the dog that he was there to save him. Seeming to n his kindness, the dog became calmer and

less scared. However, after veral unsuccessful attempts, he sank himlf to the ground, frustrated.

Just at the moment, he glanced at some pieces of wood. An idea occurred to him. He tried wedging

the pieces into the gap, pried and pushed. At the same time, he stayed cautious not to frighten the

poor dog.

Paragraph 2:

Eventually, with the few well-positioned pieces of wood, Mike managed to inrt his stick in the

right way. A little unsteadily, the animal got to its feet and pulled itlf out fully. “Yes !” The rescuer

wonderful after a hard day of work.

【范文】

Paragraph 1:

Aeropong has become an esntial family activity in Kusa’s home. The family all play the

game wearing T-shirts with the game’s name on them. Pahnuly watches the online clips nearly every

day. She was celebrating a win at Aeropong over her dad. She waved her pink cat paddle in the air.

Cats are Pahnuly’s favorite animals.

Paragraph 2:

Widely spreading on the Internet, Kusa’s game got attention across the country. It soon gained

great popularity. Meanwhile, a toy company decided to produce Aeropong on an industrial scale.

Now, he dreams of becoming a "creator and businessman". He said his big sister has already

inspired him to create other inventions.

优培13 读后续写（浙江）

真题在线

2020浙江卷】

One fallmy wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a

，

rearch camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba

，

Canada.

Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild

animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bearI like

，

it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimesthat is easier said than done. This

，

was one of tho times.

As Elli and I cooked dinnera young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed

，，

and smelled our garlic bread.

The hungry bear followed his no to our campwhich was surrounded by a high wire fence.

，

He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.

TerrifiedElli and I tried all the bear defen actions we knew. We yelled at the bearhit pots

，，

hardand fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud nois like the will scare bears

，

off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(

爪

子

).

I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its waybut it would be

，

30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this clo encounter()I took some pictures of

相遇，

the bear.

Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The

camp manager suggested I u pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyesbut doesn't hurt them.

，

So I approached our uninvited guest slowly andthrough the fencesprayed him in the face. With

，，

an angry roar()the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.

吼叫，

注意所续写短文的词数应为左右；

:1. 150

2. 5

至少使用个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.

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Paragraph2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.

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A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Mounting anger mingled with hunger

overwhelming him, he smashed his paws frantically against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp

claws at us. Panicked as we were, Elli and I squealed at the top of our lungs, waved our fists at

him and stamped heavily on the ground in an attempt to intimidate and scare him away. To our

dismay, all the efforts were in vain. This sturdy bear relentlessly banged and shoved the wooden

posts which were evidently on the verge of collapsing! This bulky and furious beast within a

stone’s throw, I flinched back and huddled with Elli tightly. Chilly winds whipping our faces, I

could hear nothing but the sound of our hearts throbbing violently in our chests.

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At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The gusting wind from the hovering vehicle

swept away our choking fear immediately. Out of the helicopter descended a rope to haul us up.

Thrilled yet relieved, we clutched the rope and eventually landed on the helicopter safe and sound.

While overlooking the chunky bear from high above, I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had

crushed the fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread. At this

once-in-a-lifetime moment, I reached into my backpack and pulled out the camera, photographing

that impressive scene. Gazing at his broad back in the melting ice field, I wondered if it was the

warmer planet that had forced the bear to hunt for food from the human regions.

（一）

I was sitting in a taxi, wondering if I had overdresd for the evening, when I looked out of

the window and saw Mother rooting through(翻找)a dustbin. It was just after dark in March. I was

stuck in traffic two blocks from the party where I was heading.

Mother stood fifteen feet away. She had tied rags around her shoulders to keep out the spring

cold and was rooting through the trash. Her eyes widened with childish joy when she found

something she liked. She looked like any of the thousands of homeless people in New York City. It

had been months since I laid eyes on mother, and when she looked up, I was afraid that she would

e me and call out my name, and that someone on the way to the same party would e us

together and that my cret would be out.

I slid down in the at and asked the driver to turn around and take me home. The taxi

提分训练

stopped in front of my building, the doorman held the door for me, and the elevator man took me

up to my floor. The apartment was silent except for the click of my heels on the polished wood

floor. I felt ashamed when I saw Mother rooting happily through the dustbin. I looked around the

room. I'd tried to turn it into the sort of place where the person I wanted to be would live. But I

could never enjoy it becau I worried about my parents on a sidewalk or somewhere el. I was

ashamed of mylf for wearing pearls and living on Park Avenue while they were busy keeping

warm and finding something to eat. I hated mylf-hated my clothes and my apartment.

What could I do? I'd tried to help them countless times, but they would insist they didn't need

my help. They said that they were living the way they wanted to. And I just accepted who they

were.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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I had to do something, so I called my mother.

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After she heard that, her smile faded.

【范文】

Paragraph 1：I had to do something, so I called my mother. I invited her to have lunch at a

restaurant. Mother was sitting at a booth，studying the menu，when I arrived. She waved heartily

when eing me. Having kisd her cheeks，I took my at and we began to order. Then I told her

that I saw her rooting through the trash the other day. I admitted that I was too ashamed to say

hello to her，but I was worried about her. Although I was not rich，I wanted to do whatever I could

to help her change her life and make it better.

Paragraph 2：After she heard that, her smile faded. A bit annoyed, she stared at me，telling me

that she and my father were fine and didn't need any help. Then she told me the reason for her

rooting through the trash that day was that people in this country were too wasteful and it was her

way of recycling. Immediately，I felt ashamed of mylf. Maybe it's I that needed help becau

there was something wrong with my values. No longer mentally trapped，I accepted with ea the

fact that my parents were who they were.

（三）

Theo stood at the microphone. Silence ttled over the hall. “Your word is onomatopoeia,” said

Mr Ramirez, the announcer. I got this! Theo thought. Spelling was sort of his superpower. He wasn't

a math or science guy, but he had a gift for spelling.

Theo's brain fast-forwarded to the spelling bees ahead: first the county championship, then the

state championship, and finally the national spelling bee. “Your answer, plea, Theo?” He glanced

back at Alexa, another fourth-grader, sitting on the edge of her chair. She wanted another chance at

winning. If he misd his word, she'd be back in the game. But that wasn't going to happen. Theo got

the right spelling.

Theo's sister, Deandra, who had also competed but misd her word, applauded with the rest of

the crowd. Mr. Ramirez prented the trophyto Theo. He lifted both arms into the air. “I'm

（奖杯）

the alpha-best.” Then he raced toward his sister. “Ha!” Theo said, making the trophy dance in front

of Deandra's no.

She rolled her eyes. “You're a terrible winner.”

“What's wrong with celebrating my victory?”

Deandra crosd her arms and made a sour face. “You know, it wasn't cool the way you ignored

Alexa onstage. She tried to shake your hand.”

Theo shrugged. “I didn't notice. Anyway, county bee, here I come!”

“You might want to crack open the dictionary before counties. In two weeks, you'll be facing

the best of the best.”

“And they'll be up against methe alpha-beast.”

，

Deandra shook her head. "Well, good luck. I think you're going to need it."

Two weeks pasd in a blink. At the county bee, students from different schools gathered

around onstage, some looking more worried than others. Finally, it was time for the contestants

（选

手）

to take their ats.

After six rounds, the group of more than 100 students decread to just ven. This was no

regular spelling bee. Theo had barely made it through the last round with a lucky guess on

conscience. And if he'd had to spell aerospace or conical, he'd be out already. His sister's advice

suddenly made n.

注意：

1.150

所续写的短文的词数应为左右；

2.5

至少使用个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

When it was his turn again, Theo stood frozen for the longest moment.

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Paragraph 2:

The following Monday at school, Theo found Alexa in the lunchroom.

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【范文】

Paragraph 1:

When it was his turn again, Theo stood frozen for the longest moment. The silence hurt his ears.

He wiped his sweaty palms on his pants. It emed that his superpower disappeared at that moment.

Theo couldn’t spell every following word. He remembered the school spelling bee and Alexa just

missing the win. He hadn’t even made it as far in his bee as she had in that one. He had to admit that

Deandra was right. He was absolutely a terrible winner, and now, a terrible lor.

Paragraph2:

The following Monday at school, Theo found Alexa in the lunchroom. “Do you mind if I sit

down?” he asked in a weak voice. Alexa slid her books aside to make room. Theo gathered up his

courage and apologized for his rudeness after he won the school bee. “It’s ok. How was the country

bee?” Alexa asked. “What a disaster.” Then shrugged his shoulders. “Would you like to be my study

partner for next time?” “Why not” Alexa’s smile emed to wipe off Theo’s frustration and he was

really expecting to be the next Alpha-best.

（三）

A few years ago, a child was lost in the woods. He was out with his brothers and sisters

gathering berries, and was accidentally parated from them, and lost. The children, after looking in

vain for some time in arch of the little wanderer, returned, just in the dusk of the evening, to

inform their parents that their brother was lost and could not be found.

The woods, at that time, were full of bears. The darkness of a cloudy night was rapidly coming

on, and the alarmed father, gathering a few of his neighbors, hurried to arch for the lost child. The

mother remained at home almost distracted with suspen(

心神不宁）。

As the clouds gathered, and the darkness incread, the father and neighbors with highly

excited fears went across the woods in all directions and raid loud shouts to attract the attention of

the child.

But their arch was in vain. They could find no trace of the wanderer and as they stood under

the branches of the tall trees and listened, they wished they might hear his weak voice. However, no

sound was brought to their ears, but the strong wind as it swept through the thick branches of the

forest.

The gathering clouds threatened an approaching storm, and the deep darkness of the night had

already enveloped them. It was difficult to imagine what were the feelings of that father. And who

could imagine how deep the worry which filled the heart of that mother, as she heard the wind and

looked at the darkness in which her child was wandering!

The arch was continued in vain till nine o'clock in the evening. Then, one of the parties was

nt back to the village, to collect the villagers for a more extensive arch. Every heart sympathized

in the sorrows of the anxious parents. Soon groups of the people were en climbing the hill. Before

long, the rain began to fall, but no news came back to the village of the lost child. Hardly an eye was

that night clod in sleep, and there was not a mother who did not feel for the parents.

注意：

1.150

所续写短文的词数应为左右；

2.5

至少使用个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

The night pasd away, and the morning dawned, and yet no news came.

Paragraph 2:

About ven in the morning,villagers made arrangements for a final arch.

【范文】

Paragraph 1:

The night pasd away, and the morning dawned, and yet no news came. Mom kept pacing up

and down in the room, looking out of the window anxiously and nervously. At the thought of his

little boy who might be threatened by wild bears, she felt a lump in her throat. Outside of the

window, a howling storm was sweeping crazily, with the loud shouts from all parties echoing in

every corner of the village. Their coats and helmets were all wet through with rains and sweats.

Exhausted as they were, none of them ever paud for a rest.

Paragraph 2:

About ven in the morning, villagers made arrangements for a final arch. This time, they

found themlves walking on a foreign path. All at once, a man shouted with wild excitement as he

found berries on the ground. Following the berries, they soon found the little wanderer in the dark

corner of a dark cave, shivering and weeping in fear, "There! There!" the father sprang to his feet

and dashed towards the boy, holding him into his arms tightly. At the sight of his father and all the

familiar villagers, the boy eventually beamed a relieved and tired smile, with tears blurring his

vision.

优培13 读后续写（浙江）

真题在线

2020浙江卷】

One fallmy wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a

，

rearch camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba

，

Canada.

Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild

animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bearI like

，

it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimesthat is easier said than done. This

，

was one of tho times.

As Elli and I cooked dinnera young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed

，，

and smelled our garlic bread.

The hungry bear followed his no to our campwhich was surrounded by a high wire fence.

，

He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.

TerrifiedElli and I tried all the bear defen actions we knew. We yelled at the bearhit pots

，，

hardand fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud nois like the will scare bears

，

off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(

爪

子

).

I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its waybut it would be

，

30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this clo encounter()I took some pictures of

相遇，

the bear.

Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The

camp manager suggested I u pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyesbut doesn't hurt them.

，

So I approached our uninvited guest slowly andthrough the fencesprayed him in the face. With

，，

an angry roar()the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.

吼叫，

注意所续写短文的词数应为左右；

:1. 150

2. 5

至少使用个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.

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_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.

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_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

【范文】

Paragraph 1:

A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Mounting anger mingled with hunger

overwhelming him, he smashed his paws frantically against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp

claws at us. Panicked as we were, Elli and I squealed at the top of our lungs, waved our fists at

him and stamped heavily on the ground in an attempt to intimidate and scare him away. To our

dismay, all the efforts were in vain. This sturdy bear relentlessly banged and shoved the wooden

posts which were evidently on the verge of collapsing! This bulky and furious beast within a

stone’s throw, I flinched back and huddled with Elli tightly. Chilly winds whipping our faces, I

could hear nothing but the sound of our hearts throbbing violently in our chests.

Paragraph 2:

At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The gusting wind from the hovering vehicle

swept away our choking fear immediately. Out of the helicopter descended a rope to haul us up.

Thrilled yet relieved, we clutched the rope and eventually landed on the helicopter safe and sound.

While overlooking the chunky bear from high above, I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had

crushed the fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread. At this

once-in-a-lifetime moment, I reached into my backpack and pulled out the camera, photographing

that impressive scene. Gazing at his broad back in the melting ice field, I wondered if it was the

warmer planet that had forced the bear to hunt for food from the human regions.

（一）

I was sitting in a taxi, wondering if I had overdresd for the evening, when I looked out of

the window and saw Mother rooting through(翻找)a dustbin. It was just after dark in March. I was

stuck in traffic two blocks from the party where I was heading.

Mother stood fifteen feet away. She had tied rags around her shoulders to keep out the spring

cold and was rooting through the trash. Her eyes widened with childish joy when she found

something she liked. She looked like any of the thousands of homeless people in New York City. It

had been months since I laid eyes on mother, and when she looked up, I was afraid that she would

e me and call out my name, and that someone on the way to the same party would e us

together and that my cret would be out.

I slid down in the at and asked the driver to turn around and take me home. The taxi

stopped in front of my building, the doorman held the door for me, and the elevator man took me

up to my floor. The apartment was silent except for the click of my heels on the polished wood

floor. I felt ashamed when I saw Mother rooting happily through the dustbin. I looked around the

room. I'd tried to turn it into the sort of place where the person I wanted to be would live. But I

could never enjoy it becau I worried about my parents on a sidewalk or somewhere el. I was

ashamed of mylf for wearing pearls and living on Park Avenue while they were busy keeping

warm and finding something to eat. I hated mylf-hated my clothes and my apartment.

What could I do? I'd tried to help them countless times, but they would insist they didn't need

提分训练

my help. They said that they were living the way they wanted to. And I just accepted who they

were.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

I had to do something, so I called my mother.

Paragraph 2:

After she heard that, her smile faded.

（三）

Theo stood at the microphone. Silence ttled over the hall. “Your word is onomatopoeia,” said

Mr Ramirez, the announcer. I got this! Theo thought. Spelling was sort of his superpower. He wasn't

a math or science guy, but he had a gift for spelling.

Theo's brain fast-forwarded to the spelling bees ahead: first the county championship, then the

state championship, and finally the national spelling bee. “Your answer, plea, Theo?” He glanced

back at Alexa, another fourth-grader, sitting on the edge of her chair. She wanted another chance at

winning. If he misd his word, she'd be back in the game. But that wasn't going to happen. Theo got

the right spelling.

Theo's sister, Deandra, who had also competed but misd her word, applauded with the rest of

the crowd. Mr. Ramirez prented the trophyto Theo. He lifted both arms into the air. “I'm

（奖杯）

the alpha-best.” Then he raced toward his sister. “Ha!” Theo said, making the trophy dance in front

of Deandra's no.

She rolled her eyes. “You're a terrible winner.”

“What's wrong with celebrating my victory?”

Deandra crosd her arms and made a sour face. “You know, it wasn't cool the way you ignored

Alexa onstage. She tried to shake your hand.”

Theo shrugged. “I didn't notice. Anyway, county bee, here I come!”

“You might want to crack open the dictionary before counties. In two weeks, you'll be facing

the best of the best.”

“And they'll be up against methe alpha-beast.”

，

Deandra shook her head. "Well, good luck. I think you're going to need it."

Two weeks pasd in a blink. At the county bee, students from different schools gathered

around onstage, some looking more worried than others. Finally, it was time for the contestants

（选

手）

to take their ats.

After six rounds, the group of more than 100 students decread to just ven. This was no

regular spelling bee. Theo had barely made it through the last round with a lucky guess on

conscience. And if he'd had to spell aerospace or conical, he'd be out already. His sister's advice

suddenly made n.

注意：

1.150

所续写的短文的词数应为左右；

2.5

至少使用个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

When it was his turn again, Theo stood frozen for the longest moment.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

___________________________

Paragraph 2:

The following Monday at school, Theo found Alexa in the lunchroom.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

（三）

A few years ago, a child was lost in the woods. He was out with his brothers and sisters

gathering berries, and was accidentally parated from them, and lost. The children, after looking in

vain for some time in arch of the little wanderer, returned, just in the dusk of the evening, to

inform their parents that their brother was lost and could not be found.

The woods, at that time, were full of bears. The darkness of a cloudy night was rapidly coming

on, and the alarmed father, gathering a few of his neighbors, hurried to arch for the lost child. The

mother remained at home almost distracted with suspen(

心神不宁）。

As the clouds gathered, and the darkness incread, the father and neighbors with highly

excited fears went across the woods in all directions and raid loud shouts to attract the attention of

the child.

But their arch was in vain. They could find no trace of the wanderer and as they stood under

the branches of the tall trees and listened, they wished they might hear his weak voice. However, no

sound was brought to their ears, but the strong wind as it swept through the thick branches of the

forest.

The gathering clouds threatened an approaching storm, and the deep darkness of the night had

already enveloped them. It was difficult to imagine what were the feelings of that father. And who

could imagine how deep the worry which filled the heart of that mother, as she heard the wind and

looked at the darkness in which her child was wandering!

The arch was continued in vain till nine o'clock in the evening. Then, one of the parties was

nt back to the village, to collect the villagers for a more extensive arch. Every heart sympathized

in the sorrows of the anxious parents. Soon groups of the people were en climbing the hill. Before

long, the rain began to fall, but no news came back to the village of the lost child. Hardly an eye was

that night clod in sleep, and there was not a mother who did not feel for the parents.

注意：

1.150

所续写短文的词数应为左右；

2.5

至少使用个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

The night pasd away, and the morning dawned, and yet no news came.

Paragraph 2:

About ven in the morning,villagers made arrangements for a final arch.

【范文】

Paragraph 1：I had to do something, so I called my mother. I invited her to have lunch at a

restaurant. Mother was sitting at a booth，studying the menu，when I arrived. She waved heartily

when eing me. Having kisd her cheeks，I took my at and we began to order. Then I told her

that I saw her rooting through the trash the other day. I admitted that I was too ashamed to say

hello to her，but I was worried about her. Although I was not rich，I wanted to do whatever I could

to help her change her life and make it better.

Paragraph 2：After she heard that, her smile faded. A bit annoyed, she stared at me，telling me

that she and my father were fine and didn't need any help. Then she told me the reason for her

rooting through the trash that day was that people in this country were too wasteful and it was her

way of recycling. Immediately，I felt ashamed of mylf. Maybe it's I that needed help becau

there was something wrong with my values. No longer mentally trapped，I accepted with ea the

fact that my parents were who they were.

【范文】

Paragraph 1:

When it was his turn again, Theo stood frozen for the longest moment. The silence hurt his ears.

He wiped his sweaty palms on his pants. It emed that his superpower disappeared at that moment.

Theo couldn’t spell every following word. He remembered the school spelling bee and Alexa just

missing the win. He hadn’t even made it as far in his bee as she had in that one. He had to admit that

Deandra was right. He was absolutely a terrible winner, and now, a terrible lor.

Paragraph2:

The following Monday at school, Theo found Alexa in the lunchroom. “Do you mind if I sit

down?” he asked in a weak voice. Alexa slid her books aside to make room. Theo gathered up his

参考答案

courage and apologized for his rudeness after he won the school bee. “It’s ok. How was the country

bee?” Alexa asked. “What a disaster.” Then shrugged his shoulders. “Would you like to be my study

partner for next time?” “Why not” Alexa’s smile emed to wipe off Theo’s frustration and he was

really expecting to be the next Alpha-best.

【范文】

Paragraph 1:

The night pasd away, and the morning dawned, and yet no news came. Mom kept pacing up

and down in the room, looking out of the window anxiously and nervously. At the thought of his

little boy who might be threatened by wild bears, she felt a lump in her throat. Outside of the

window, a howling storm was sweeping crazily, with the loud shouts from all parties echoing in

every corner of the village. Their coats and helmets were all wet through with rains and sweats.

Exhausted as they were, none of them ever paud for a rest.

Paragraph 2:

About ven in the morning, villagers made arrangements for a final arch. This time, they

found themlves walking on a foreign path. All at once, a man shouted with wild excitement as he

found berries on the ground. Following the berries, they soon found the little wanderer in the dark

corner of a dark cave, shivering and weeping in fear, "There! There!" the father sprang to his feet

and dashed towards the boy, holding him into his arms tightly. At the sight of his father and all the

familiar villagers, the boy eventually beamed a relieved and tired smile, with tears blurring his

vision.