【精品英语】初中英语书面表达练习题含解析

【精品英语】初中英语书面表达练习题含解析

一、初中英语书面表达

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．（广东中考模拟）书面表达

以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约词的短文。

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要求：完整叙述图画内容。

1.

2.

简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

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．（山东中考模拟）写作

读万卷书行万里路。为帮助中小学生了解国情、热爱祖国、开阔眼界、增长知识提

,,

高社会责任感、创新精神和实践能力教育部倡导开展研学旅行（）活动。你校

,“ study tour”

也计划开展此项活动但是有些学生表示欢迎也有些表示反对。请你以

,, My Opinions on

Study Tour,,

为题写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法并说明理由。

要求

1.,,;

结合以上提示阐明自己的观点可适当发挥以使行文连贯

2.

文中不得出现真实的人名、校名

3.:80-100,

词数（文章开头已给出不计入总词数）。

可参考以下词汇

the n of social responsibility; creative spirit; practical ability

社会责任感创新精神实践能力

My Opinions on Study Tour

In recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours for

Students

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．（全国中考模拟）假如你是，你们学校正在开展爱心传递，从我做起主题教育活

动。请你根据所列提示问题谈谈你对这个活动的认识，用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投

稿。

提示问题：

（）（）

1 Why do you show your kindness to others? At least one reason

（）（）

2 What do you usually do when someone needs help? At least two examples

（）

3 How do you feel?

写作要求：

（）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

1

（）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

2

（）词数：词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

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（）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

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．（山东中考模拟）书面表达

随着互联网和手机终端发展，成瘾性网络游戏使一些中学生沉迷其中，影响了学习进步和

身心健康。上周你们学校开展了一次以

“How to keep students away from too many computer

games ”

为主题的专题讨论。请根据下表中的要点提示，写一篇短文，提出一些意见。

1.

开班会课讨论网络游戏的优缺点；

学校要做些什么开展有益的校外活动，如运动会，外出游玩等；

2.

3., ……

多与那些痴迷于游戏和聊天的学生进行交流；

家长要做些什么

学生要做些什么（至少两点）

1.……

自己少玩手机，多陪伴，；

2.……

密切配合学校，；

……

注意短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；

1.

2.100

词数左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数；

3.

文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名；

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．（江苏中考模拟）书面表达

Hey Li Ming,

I will move to your community and stay for two months. I want to know something about your

community. What is your community like? What activities do you usually have? How can I get

along with your neighbors?

Write soon!

Yours,

Ben

假如你是，请用英语给笔友回复邮件。

Li MingBen

注意：

1.

文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.

语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

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词数左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Ben,

I’m very glad to know that you will come to our community.

Yours,

Li Ming

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．（四川中考模拟）书面表达

根据青少年读书少的现象，请根据表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一份向全校同学提出的

倡议。

读书的意义获取知识，增长见识，使人聪明，使人快乐，有助于学习，有助于成长。

目前的状况听音乐、看电视、上网等占去了学生大部分的读书时间。

发出倡议多读书，读好书。

注意：、词数左右；、倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

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、倡议书须包括所有内容要点，行文连贯，表达清楚。

参考词汇：获取知识增长见识

gain knowledge; open the mind.

My dear friends,

2.

政府将采取更多的措施改善环境。

担心者的观点

你的观点及你的打算学生自拟（至少两点）

1.

大量的树木仍将被砍伐。

2.

私家车将越来越多。

提示：短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。短文中应包含至少个要点。

1.2.4

3.80.

书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于

参考词汇：乐观的政府 采取措施

optimistic adj. government n.take measures to

private adj.

私有的

Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Wor?

Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.

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．（湖北中考模拟）书面表达

为响应我市创建国家卫生城市的号召，月日，多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与

“”635000

了生态随州环白云湖健步走活动。请以共建绿色城市为主题，根据以下文字提示，

“——”“”

并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

主题Let’s build a green city together

方式益处

具体

做法

1.

骑车、徒步出行避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染

2.

不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰让城市变得干净舒适

3.

植树造林美化城市，保护环境

你的

建议

联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议。（至少条）

2

3

．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名．

参考词汇：吐痰垃圾箱交通拥堵环境

spit dustbin traffic jams environment

As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city._______

______________________________ ____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_________

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．（黑龙江中考模拟）话题作文：根据汉语提示和要求写一篇短文。（和两篇，可

任选一篇）

现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物就是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但

是网购有利有弊，请根据下面提供的信息用英语以为题写一篇短文，描述

“Online shopping”

网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。

优点：、可以在任何时候购物；、只需要一台电脑和鼠标；、方便比较同类产品的价

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格，可以省钱；

4

、无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。

缺点：、网上付款有时不安全；、看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。

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注意：、语意连贯，表达准确；、词数－。字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合

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乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

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．（湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）书面表达。

现在提倡全民阅读，某英语网站正在举办以为题的英语征文活动。请根据以下提

”reading”

示，写一篇英语短文，向该网站投稿。

提示：读书有哪些好处？

1.

2.

中学生可以读哪些书？

3.

要求：、短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；

1

2

、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

3

、语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；

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、词数：词左右．短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．

Now all the Chine people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the

Chine Dream

．

13·

．（全国中考模拟）假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生。你班班主任在安排座位

时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进

行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观

点。

70%1.

的学生赞学习成绩不好，但擅长体育、艺术；

成相互学习，发展友谊；

30%1.

的学生反部分学习差的学生常常上课讲话而不认真听讲；

对经常问问题，影响别人。

你的观点（至少发挥两句）

2.

2.

……

注意：词数：字左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

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Yours

，

Li Ping

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．（全国中考模拟）假如你校正在开展读好书，促成长活动，请你根据这项活动的主

题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议，号召大家参与此项活动。

1.

没有阅读的习惯，不知道读什么。

阅读现状作业太多，没有足够的时间阅读。

2.

3.

宁愿把空闲时间花在电脑游戏上。

你的情况

你的想法……

热爱阅读，学校阅读俱乐部的成员。从阅读中获得了很多知识。自去年

9

月以来，已看了多本书。

10

注意事项：

1.

短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2.“”2-3

在你的想法一栏中须围绕主题，用句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

3.90

词数在个左右，短文的开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4.

短文内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

Dear friends,

Reading is very important in our daily life.

2.

不得出现真实的校名和人名。

A good book that influenced me a lot

Boys and girls,

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

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．（广东中考模拟）书面表达

假设你是刘莉，你的美国笔友来信想了解中国的传统节日端午节。请你回信给她介绍

Amy

端午节。

历史：两千多年

日期：每年农历五月初五

庆祝活动赛龙舟，包粽子（用粽子叶包着糯米，肉，豆）

The Dragon Boat

Festival

特色食品粽子

目的纪念屈原

很好的传统节日，提醒我们回顾历史，纪念名人，也给我们一个和

家人团聚的节日。

泳；不会游泳，不要下水救人

……

要求：．语言通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

1

2

．内容可适当发挥。

3

．文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

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．词数：词左右。

参考词汇：（未经许可）

alone without permission allow

ask for help cherish

（珍爱）

Going Swimming Safely

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．（四川中考模拟）书面表达

现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦

点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。

1.

方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。

2.

有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。

3.

买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。

4.

网络支付不安全。

容和时间

要求：、词数不少于词，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。

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2

、向子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；

3

、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_________

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．（北京中考模拟）自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活

越来越精彩。

假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地自信助我成长专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要

“”

性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。

提示词语：，，，

powerfulhappybelieve inkeep doing

提示问题：

Why is it important to be confident?

What experience made you more confident?

How can we become more confident?

It's very important to be confident

这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容

完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图

片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作

提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语

动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺

序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻

译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中

点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用

恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作

者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树

木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章

的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了

过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如等。语法

found, kept, got, were, spoke

规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如

They found that a young tree needed

watering and it was going to die.So they decided to

这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如

do something for the young treedecided to do sth.After

这句话中使用了句型决定做某事；

that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their

teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.after that, speak highly of

这两句话中用了短语等等。

2My Opinions on Study Tour

．

In recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing stu

解析：

My Opinions on Study Tour

In recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours for

students so that they can have a better understanding of life and students are crazy

about such tours while others show their great concerns.

Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of

the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the

campus,they can learn through their own experiences and can understand

better about what they have learned from textbooks. Besides,study tours contribute a lot to

5.

最后要提出安全的要求。我们必须把安全放在第一位。

6.

时态以一般现在时为主。人称较为灵活。

3At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in

．

trouble.

It is very i

解析：

At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.

It is very important for us to show our kindness to others becau everyone needs help when

they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourlves.

As a student, I usually nd my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes,

I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need.

Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have become clo friends.

I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more

people to help them.

【解析】这是一篇关于学校正在开展爱心传递，从我做起主题教育活动，谈谈自己的看

“”

法；

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的

正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连

词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

It’s++for sb to do sthmake great progress

形容词做某事对某人来说是怎样的；取得巨大进步

4Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too

．

They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and

disadvantages of the Internet.

他们认为他们的学校可以开班会，帮助他们认识到互联网的利

与弊。

动词不定式用作目的状

to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.

语。

高分句型【】

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Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school.

此外，学校应该定期举

办有益的校外活动。

此句是含有情态动词的被动语态。其构成为：情态动词及物动词的过去分词。

+be+

高分句型【】

3

Working cloly with schools is another important way for parents to help them.

与学校紧密合

作是家长帮助他们的另一重要途径。

动名词作主语，视作单数，因此动词用。

Working cloly with schoolsbeis

5The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked

．

after me carefully. If

解析：

The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me

carefully. If I felt upt, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but

also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：本文是要求写一封电子邮件，写作时注意要写信的格式。假如你是

Li

MingBen

，请用英语给笔友回复邮件。动笔前要认真阅读电子邮件，写作时需回答邮件内

所提问题，可适当发挥。仔细阅读本的电子邮件，找出他的问题（我想了解一下你们社区

的情况。你的社区是什么样的？你通常有什么活动？我怎样和你的邻居相处？），然后根

据问题做出回答。根据内容可知本文主要时态是一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使

用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看

有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲：社区是什么样的

1. in the

northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. do

活动

some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our homework.3.

怎样和邻居相处

kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into

someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.

（二）根据提纲连词成句，然后连句成篇，注意连词

的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小

写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。

点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思

连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语写作时就

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可以适当引用使文章的表达更有逻辑性更富有条理。（）注意给出的起始句（这就给出

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了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（）列

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好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连

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词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。（）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的

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正确运用。（）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

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7My dear friends,

．

Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It c

解析：

My dear friends,

Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only

8Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Wor?

．

Many students are optimisticabout tour envi

（乐观的）

解析：

Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Wor?

Many students are optimisticabout tour environment in ten yearsIn factthey

（乐观的）．，

think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our

government will take more measures to improve our environmentAs a result, our world will be

．

more beautiful and we will have better lives.

Howeverother students are worried about the futureThey say a number of trees will be cut

，．

down and there will be more and more private cars.Thereforewe will have even more

．，

environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available

．

But in my opinionI think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more

，

happily

．

【解析】这篇作文要求我们就荣光中学九年级班的同学们对环境问题所召开的一次班会

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情况进行介绍。这个班会的主题是，对于

Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Wor?

未来的环境，很多同学吃乐观的态度，而其他同学感到很担心。题目中用表格的形式给我

们呈现了这些内容，我们需要用正确的英语将他们表达出来，首先我们应注意英语表达习

惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的句型、词汇和短语，

以简单句的结构为主，如主谓宾、主系表等，点缀几个并列句或复合句，提升文章档次。

其次注意使用正确的时态和人称，本文应以一般现在时态和一般将来时为主，注意谓语动

词的正确形式。最后应注意在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章的逻辑关系更加合

理，文意流畅、连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并根据

表达的需要，进行了合理的想象和补充，使文意更加的充实。短文共分为三段，前两段各

描述了不同的同学们的观点，最后一段用一句话点明了自己的看法，层次清晰，叙述条

理、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文

以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主，阐明了学生们的不同观点，以简单句为主，也用了

一些复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感，更有表现力。最后短文中使用了一些较好

的句型和短语，如

In fact, they think that more and more people will take part in the

environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our

environmentAs a resultHoweverhey say a number of trees will be cut down and there

．、、、

will be more and more private cars.Therefore, we will have even more environmental

or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a

comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city

beautiful.

In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also

save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a

part in building our city.

【解析】

本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述。实际上就是要求书写一份倡议

书。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内

容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充两条个人的观点。注意表达的条理性，用好

连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。

高分句型一：

We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking.

通过骑自行

车或步行，这样就可以避免交通阻塞，减少空气污染。是并列连词，连接的是两个相

and

同的谓语，是介词，意思是通过某组织方式。

by""

高分句型二：

In my daily lifeI can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go.

，在我的日常生活

中，无论我走到哪里，我会捡垃圾，把垃圾放进垃圾箱里。是固定短语，意思是

pick up"

捡起，是固定短语，意思是放进引导的是让步状语从句，从句的意思

"put into""wherever

是无论我到哪里。

""

10Online shopping

．

There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.

Online sho

解析：

Online shopping

There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.

Online shopping has veral advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the

Internet you only need a computer and mou. Third, you can compare the prices of the same

product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!

time, it can als

解析：

Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it

can also help us open our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more. In my

opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials. As for me, I plan to

read one book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes, reading

makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.

【解析】写作分析：本文需要按照要求以阅读为主题写作，要写出读书的好处、中学生

“”

可以读的书、你的读书计划。按照要求逐条描述即可，但要注意增添相关细节使得文章连

贯。

写作亮点：

总起要对做一个概括，用到了（扮演重要的角色）这一搭

reading“plays an important role”

配，关于读书的好处提到了：（开阔思维），（放松）。关于可以读的

open our mindsrelax

书，介绍了几种文本（），关于介绍读书计划，描述了

textbooks, newspapers and magazine

自己读书的频率，最后，有引用谚语，也是一个亮点。

12Now all the Chine people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and

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achieve the Chines

解析：

Now all the Chine people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve

the Chine Dream

．

In the fieldsa large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levelsIn

，．

order to produce enough vegetables and fruitthey are busy growing plantsMeanwhilein

，．，

hospitalsdoctors and nurs always try their best to save patients day and nightBesides

，．，

they also take good care of the oldIn our daily lifewe can e many policemen in

．（医生），

the streets on duty to protect peopleAs for scientiststhey concentrate more on

．（警察），

scientific studies to invent something uful and rai our living standardsAs

．（科学家）

studentswhat should we do to build our countryI think we should study hard to get rich

，？

knowledge so as to make contributions to our country

。

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦，农民，医生，警察和

科学家怎样做贡献的。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三

人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应

用，比如：，，，

Now all the Chine people are……they are busy……we can e……I think……

等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符

合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了为了实现中国梦，中国人正在努力做贡献，

接下来介绍农民、医生、警察和科学家如何做贡献的，最后表示我们作为学生应该做的

事。此处

make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good

care of, concentrate on, make contributions to

等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

13Dear Mr. Zhang,

．

We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to shar

解析：

We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with

a slower student.

70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do

well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.

However, 30 percent of the students don’t agree. They think some slower students always talk in

class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower students often ask

questions and they may influence others.

I think I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can

make progress together.

Yours

Li Ping

【解析】这是一篇图表，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同

桌，这在学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据表格把讨论结

果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点

组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意

不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号

及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

agree with sbbe good at learn from each other

同意某人；擅长；互相学习

14Dear friends,

．

Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the readin

解析：

Dear friends,

Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They

or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how

Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard

learning period.

From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we

should never give in or run away. Instead, we are suppod to face them bravely and try to find

ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our

souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以为题作演讲，向同

“A good book that influenced me a lot ”

学们介绍一本自己读过的好书。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第

一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句

式的应用，比如：，，，

A good book can……My Life Story by Helen Keller is……It is about……

we should……we are suppod to……let’s read……

，，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，

注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我读过的一本好书的名字，接下来介绍我读

这本书的时间，所读的内容以及阅读这本书的原因，最后鼓励大家多读好书。此处

by

doing

sth, come across, give in, run away, be suppod to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth

等这

些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

16Dear Amy,

．

I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chine

traditional fe

解析：

Dear Amy,

I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chine traditional festival---

the Dragon Boat Festival. I ‘m happy to share what I know about it with you.

The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month

according to the Chine lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races

and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo

leaves. The two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.

In a word, we all love the festival becau it’s a good reminder to look back on

history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it

with us in the near future.

share sth with sb, according to, in a word, look back, get together

等这些词组的运用也让文章

增色不少。

17Summer vacation is coming. Many students like going swimming in rivers or

．

lakes. But how to swim sa

解析：

Summer vacation is coming. Many students like going swimming in rivers or lakes. But

how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. We shouldn’t go

swimming alone. We can’t swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to

swim without a parent. If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person.

Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.

We live only oncewe must cherish life.

，

【解析】这是一篇谈谈你对安全游泳的建议。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材

料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗

漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点

符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

18Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.

．

It’s a new way of shopping. It has lot

解析：

Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.

It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can

shop whenever you like becau the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods

and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides,

we can learn lots of information about goods.

Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t e the material objects or check their

quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and

don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay

through the internet.

We should be careful when we shop on the internet.

【解析】

写作分析：本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，

注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段

描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。具体来说，每个

观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。

写作亮点：

首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题。第二段开始描述优势，这里用到

Internet Shopping

了无论什么时候你喜欢想要（）结构，在表达是开放的也很准确，

“/”whenever you like“...”

用了。比较级的应用也相对准确，例如。连词的使用也是亮点，

“be open”cheaperbesides

意为除此之外。在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语，是个亮点。

“”“Every coin has two sides.”

Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the

Intern

解析：

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.

Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is

filled with uful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to

learn. However, some students don’t welcome it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information

on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time arching information

online is bad for their eyes.

In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to u both the traditional way of

learning and online learning. Students should u the Internet properly.

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以网上学习（）为话题，结合本题所给

“online learning”

的写作信息，阐述网上学习的两种不同的观点。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时

态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧

密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的

感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中，

more convenientis filled with, what’s more, a

lot of however, although, ,be bad for, in my opinion

，等词（组）恰当使用，

使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、让步状语从句、动名词作主语等句

式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

20It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick

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to what we do. S

解析：

It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what

we do. So it’s valuable to us.

When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced

it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I

breathed deeply and relaxed mylf. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the

speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much

encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.

To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop

them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can