20考研复试班第一次自我介绍之个人详评PDF(1)

2023年12月3日发(作者：闲杂人等)

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⻚页码：1/11各位同学：我们《20考研复试班》第一一次课程的作业在我规定的两天内一一共收到近200个同学的录音音或视频，我花了一一整天时间，除去发博吃饭去洗手手间的时间，全天十十多小小时从早到晚一一动不动地一一个同学一一个同学地听大大家的音音频、看大大家的视频，每一一位同学的音音视频我至至少听过2次或看过2次，多的时候会达到3-5次以上。第二二次又又花了半天时间来批改后交上来同学的音音频及后入入群同学的音音频。我给予四个评判标准，分别是流利度、逻辑内容、语音音语调、音音量情感表现等，然后每一一个部分我按照满分10分的标准给予打分，有明显语法错误的我会标注，大大家在流利度上都做得相当好，大大部分同学的问题都集中在语音音上。尤其是单词发音音，有错读、重音音错、数读等问题，这些问题我后续的课堂上会讲到，也希望大大家自自己己花时间改善一一下发音音。有语音音班、也有发音音视频，重点模仿练习。另外就是音音量和情感的问题，音音量一一定要大大，不然真的没戏，因为老老师听不⻅见你在说什么，你就没有机会了。情感要饱满，要热情，要愉悦，不要一一副不情愿的样子子和听起来十十分懒散的声音音，要知道谁都喜欢阳光的人人。这样的问题后续课程上我还会讲到。第一一次作业大大家完成得不错。后续的同学陆续补交，我再抽时间评改，加在下方方的表格后面面。第一一次课为了鼓鼓励大大家，我把评判作业的方方式做到了一一对一一评改，每一一位同学的音音频或视频我都一一一一记录下来，并写下来对于个体的意⻅见与建议。其实看下图我们会发现绝大大部分同学的问题都是大大同小小异的，大大家都有着一一样的问题，所以后续2-6次课课后的作业大大家依然要积极提交，只不过我不再做下方方的表格一一一一进行行评判，而而是一一一一仔细听大大家的音音视频作业，然后记录下来大大家的所有问题，之后以文文字记录和音音频讲解的方方式给大大家统一一提出我的意⻅见和修正建议，望大大家周知。所以，每一一次课你要积极地提交作业，要好好跟直播听课，更要好好练习，之后每次课都按照我统一一⻚页码：2/11发布的修正建议再改进，再练习，最后达到最好的状态步入入面面试考场。我们加油。⻚页码：3/11姓名时静孙作正邹彦琪好事发生生奥利奥曹亚菲钱静瑶申露漪许致宁天使不哭朋友吃榴芒薛雨雨晴张俊霞⺩王洁仲雨雨晴初士士豪富馨毅陈妍范雅洁⻩黄章彦纪德姝代淑华周雯邱晓楠林奕楠邵东莹邓佳雨雨念你任泳蘅张⺩王茜carey潘佳豪打不开8－8.588888-8.588 the不要888.57.5-8 time fun all87.5 lf87 travel87－7.5 actually all7.5 ago 不许咂嘴7 actually time87 major87 call 7 男生生声音音太温柔8-8.58-8.57 声音音小小了 要大大声88778－8.588888888 can 非非could88888-8.5888-8.5888-8.58流利度逻辑内容语法88 (graduate 加ed)8语音音语调6.5－7 name China音音量／气气息／情感778778787888-8.58777777无无收尾6.5－ 不能数读8.57.5 actually also8.57.5 actually will87 actually

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