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写作一:建议信(ALetterofAdvice)
[题型特点]
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能
是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建
议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,condly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,
later,lastbutnotleast等依次陈述建议,具体结构为:
建议信
①表明写作意图
②具体的建议及理由
③指出采纳建议的好处
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
①Iknowyouhavetroublein...tingtogiveyousome
suggestions/giveyouahand.
在读了你的信后,我知道你在……上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
②You’veaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding...andI’lltrytomakesomeuful
suggestionshere.
关于……你向我征求建议,在此,我将尽力提出一些有用的建议。
③I’msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroublewith/indoing...atthemoment.
得知此刻你遇到……麻烦我深感遗憾。
④I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhow...
非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何……你向我征求意见。
2.主体部分常用语
①Whenitcomesto/Asfor...Iwouldliketosuggest/recommend...
涉及/关于……我想建议……
②Thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.
我的建议如下。
③Inmyopinion/Personally/AsfarasI’mconcerned,itwouldbewitotakethefollowing
action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
④Youmay/mightaswelldo...
你不妨做……
⑤Iwouldliketosuggestthat...
我想建议……
⑥IfIwereyou,Iwould...
如果我是你,我会……
⑦Itemstomethatyoucould...
我认为你可以……
⑧Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...
我想如果你能……可能会更有利。
3.结尾常用语
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①Ihopeyouwillfindthesuggestionshelpful./Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefittoyou.
我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。
②aveanyquestionsorrequirements,
pleadonothesitatetotellme./Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleafeelfreetoaskmeatanytime.
我希望你会考虑我的建议。如果你有任何问题或要求,请毫不犹豫地告诉我。/如果你有任
何问题,请随时问我。
③Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/considerationriously.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
[黄金模板]
Dear________,(建议对象)
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto____________.(引出对方需要建
议的主题)
Hereareafewsuggestions.(引出作者建议)First,itisimportantto________.Then,italsohelps
to_______________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________________.Youcan
also________.
可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下:
Asto________,Isuggest________.(需要具体到某一方面)Inaddition,__________.(其他的
建议)I’msure_______________.(预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心)
Ihope__________.(表达愿望)
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
[范文鉴赏]
DearPeter,
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinewell.(引出建议主
题)Hereareafewsuggestions.(引出个人建议)First,itisimportanttotakeaChinecour,as
you’,italsohelpsto
watchTV,andreadbooks,s,it
shouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesongs,becaubydoingsoyou’lllearnand
lltellyoua
lotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChine.(具体建议)
TryandwritemeinChinenexttime
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
[模拟写作]
DearHeadmaster,
Asastudentofthisschool,Ifeelthatitismyobligationtomakesomesuggestionsconcerning
thebasicconditionsofourdormitory
Generallyspeaking,r,therearetwounpleasant
aspectsthatcauinconveniencetous:First,becautheheatingsystemisinneedofimprovementit
,thefurnitureisnotdesignedina
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snoshelftoplacebooks.
Iwouldbeverygratefulifmyproposalcouldbeconsideredandpositivechangescouldtake
placeintheregards.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
假设你是李华,你的好友李明在交友过程中遇到了困难,请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封
信,给他提一些建议:
1.帮他分析原因
2.给他提出建议
3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算
注意:100词左右
短语再现:inorderto
Joinin
Beconcernedabout
Getalongwellwith
Communicatewith
Lastbutnotleast
微写作
rtohavefriends,youhavegottobeanhonestperson.
,you’dbetterjoinsomeclubsandjoininsomeactivitiestomeetnewfriends.
,onceyouhavefriends,learntobeconcernedaboutthem.
’tignorethematanytime.
tnotleast,youshouldgetalongwellwiththemandoftencommunicatewiththem.
DearLiMing,
Inyourletter,yousaidyouarenotgoodatcommunicationwithothersandoftenfeellonely.I
thinkyoucanjustmakeitsogoodasyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.
First,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates',youshouldtakean
activepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively,andatthe
sametime,,itwillbeagood
megoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyouif
youcandotheabove.
Ihopeyouwillfindtheideasuful.
Yours,
LiHua
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假设你叫张伟,你的一位朋友李华刚刚被一所中学聘为美术老师,因为刚毕业没
有教学经验,担心教课不受学生欢理,特写信向你征求建议,回信应包括如下内容
1.鼓励他不要有顾虑,要向经验丰富的老师学习,认真教学
2.多与学生交流,请课要尽量生动活泼,多讲些学生喜欢的
内容注意:1.词数100个左右
2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数
DearIiHua
Iamdelightedtohavereceivedyourletterandheardaboutyourprentsituationwithyou.
Firstly,now,itis
ly,beingayoungteacher,you'd
betterlearnfromexperiencedteachersanddevotemoretimetostudyingteachingmethods.
Thirdly,sinceyoujustgraduatedfromuniversity,
otherwords,tnotleast,youshouldteach
themmoreaboutwhattheyliketoknow.
Bydoingso,Ithinkyouwouldcertainlyovercometheworry
Goodlucktoyoueveryday
Faithfullyyours
ZhangWei
假设你是李华,曾在伦敦奥运会上担任志愿者,你的英国笔友杰克逊想当2016年
奥运会的志愿者,但他不知道作为一名志思者需要什么条件以及要干些什么,请
你根据以下要点给杰克逊回信:
1.志愿者必须热情,具有率献精神
2.为来自世界各地的运动员及官员当向导
3.提供信息、翻译、急救以及运动场地的其他服务
4.帮助运动员们提东西
DearJackson,
It'snicetohearfromyou.I'mgladtohearthatyou'dliketobeavolunteerofthe2016
OlympicGames.
Asavolunteer,,youshouldactasaguideforthe
'smore,youshouldalsoprovideinformation,
translation,ssary,you
issimple,r,itisveryimportant
andmeaningful.
Bestwishes
Yours,
LiHua
假如你叫李华,你的好朋友李明英语听力水平不高,每次考试因此失多分,他很苦
恼,特向你求助,请给他写一封信提出可行的建议,词数100个左右
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DearLiMing
'dbetterco
Theandfollowmyadvice.
aveagoodvocabulary?You’dbettermakeaplantorecitevocabularievery
htimedoyouspendlisteningtoEnglishmaterialveryday?Onaverage,thetime
,howwelldoyoumakeuofskills?Infact,masteringsuchbasicskills
isandnecessary,likegoingthroughthequestionsandanswersquickly,predictingwhatthetitleis
as
keepontrying,youaresuretomakegreatprogress.
Lookingforwardtoyourgoodgradenexttime.
Yours,
LiHua
李丽华是某校高二年级学生,看到本市要修建新车站,想给总工程师写一封100个词左右的信,
提出几点建议:
首先,建议在车站内为老人、小孩、残疾人设计特殊的座位,以便他们及时得到体息
第二,对于洗手间的设计,要考虑到方便小孩和残疾人,如轮椅能够进入洗手间,自来水
开关要设计得低一些
第三,从休息室到站台设置轮椅通行的通道
DearSir,
oumindmegivingyou
someadvice?Iwouldbeverygladifyoucouldconsiderthefollowingthingsinyourdesign.
Specialatsshouldbearrangedfortheold,thekidsandthepeoplewithdisabilities,sothey
omsshouldbebuiltwithaisleswideenoughsothedisabledinthe
sshouldbelowenoughforthedisabledandthe
ore,thoinwheelchairscangotothe
busdirectly.
That’ou!
Yourssincerely,
LiLihua
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